Team Epic Beta Testers! (slightly revised)

Focus, you will be added.

woot! I'l search you up later today.

I can put up my level for testing. I know I need some visual advice as there isn't much detail. However I'll need to make a quick EPIC lock since I would also appreciate some thoughts on the intro.

Cool. Is this the Snow Mountain Adventure? I want to play that.

Abandoned Factory has a new version out.

=D

I've added a short new little puzzle as well as added a constant thunder sound in the background! If someone could make a lightning sound randomizer, it would be greatly appreciated. I dun get randomizers AT ALL.

Also, how far along in the level do you think I am? The thermo's about 50% full, and it takes ME around four minutes to complete, with side puzzles included. In the jackofcourse guide, he said 5-7 minutes, but I don't know about my level. Can you tell me what you think?

i'll check it out tonight, this is what i've been waiting for

Thanks for your enthusiasm!

It's not much of an addition though.

, is it almost done?

That's what I need your opinion for.

The thermo's 50% full and it's stopped moving, so how long should it be?

I don't to test people's patience.

jackofcourse's guide says not to have it much more than 5 minutes, but I disagree. When I'm playing a really good level, I hate for it to end. When really good levels are going and then just end I always make my sackboy angry. As long as the level is really good, I want it to be ten minutes, give or take a few. Level's like yours should be long, or at least have a sequel.

Kk, that's what I'll shoot for. 9-10 minutes sounds achievable.

I have two new sections done, but I didn't have time to publish it.

The newest section is out! Two new puzzles, but scenery is not added yet to these.

I'm registering a level to be tested. Just search sethisi, it's titled "City savior Sack" but there's no way I'll keep that. It uses a bunch of jon burgerman stickers, and its no where near done. Tell me what you think! (so far). And insults are allowed.

I've published another level in my epic beta room, but its there solely for safekeeping. If you want to test it, fine, but be warned, its a short and sometimes buggy mess.

Sethisi, I have played your level: City Savior Sack and here are my thoughts.

First off, the level seems unpolished and rushed. The background is just a plain blue sticker made really big with a few out of place Jon Burgerman stickers. I would recommend selecting the gardens background, (which I think you have) and creating cut-outs for the background. That would make the level look fantastic. The true scenery you had were cut-outs the just gave me a "meh". The gameplay you had was not bad, although it really was only one thing. Also, why was there electricity just sitting up in a tree?

All in all, work on the scenery and making the level look high-quality. Spend some time improving your cut-outs, and most importantly, GET RID OF THE PLAIN BLUE BACKGROUND.

Hmmm... thanks for the feed back! There was electricity in the tree so you wouldn't switch there, before i added that, it was really annoying. I guess it was boring. Oh, the origins of this level was i was playing with my new pack, the jon burgerman thing. i made some characters, like the mayor, and the guy with the creepy cat. Everything was not pre-made. Except the cat. As for the scenery, i thought it would be more amateur if i used the pre-made background. Seems it did the opposite . And what mis-placed jon burgerman stickers were you talking about? And what exactly do you mean by cutouts? As for a final boss, I don't know if anyone has seen this video: http://g4tv.com/videos/28930/LittleBigPlanet-Anatomy-of-a-Level/ but it has a media molecule boss that was never published. Of course it could be super hard to make and i'll give up

I updated my level, but I didn't elongate it. I used some of jaslow's suggestions. let me know what you think!

I'll check it out as soon as I can!

cool thanx, and I'm probably gonna delete the ghost part. Thats my least favorite part.

At least change the lighting. I can't see anything in there.

Btw, Fiery Friendship has a ton more added. I recommend checking it out, but its 2P only!